Sunday, 7 June 2009

Keeping It Real

David Hockney

Of all contemporary artists David Hockney explores perspective in the most interesting of ways. I love his polaroid collages - so like the human eye, flitting around noticing details, breaking down the scene into snapshots. Perspective is a curious thing - maybe some of you have studied it in art classes. Somewhere along the line, art stopped looking like this:

Mainly thanks to discoveries about perspective, paintings began to look a little more lifelike ...


The Fra Angelico altarpiece is dazzling when you see it in the flesh - it's not 'lifelike' because there are still issues with scale, foreshortening, but you can see a gradual progression towards what we would recognise as realistic representation. Maybe some of you caught David Hockney's documentary recently - he suggested that around 1430 there was a sudden technical leap in the realism of paintings. Suddenly painting improved - and he put it down to the use of optical tools.

I've been thinking a lot about perspective this week - maybe because the three projects I'm working on are set in the past (one Spanish Civil War, one World War II, one 1980's). Do you think it's possible to see things clearly only in retrospect? I wonder whether in writing there have been similar 'leaps' in ability. Individually, the books we read, the classes we attend help take our writing up to the next level. Our stories and characters go from flat, 2-D, primitive to something full bodied, illusionistic. My gut instinct is that most of us improve in this way. Rather than a steady improvement day by day, with creative acts I think there are sudden bursts, a forward momentum that's impossible to sustain continuously.

What's been tough lately is a sense of standing still. At a birthday party yesterday I bumped into a screenwriter who had been kind enough to ask to read The Book at Christmas. 'What?' she said incredulously. 'Still nothing?' She loved it. It's great to hear how your work has affected someone, but what can you do if a publisher doesn't love it enough? The screenwriter said 'Hang in there. It's not 'if' but 'when' you'll get published'. Which was kind. It made me think of today's gorgeous video clip. If not now then when? Frustrating isn't the word, and for a while I lost all perspective about it. But as we've said before 'never give up, never give in' - and maybe giving writing that 'extra 10%' people talk about is the key. Maybe it's time to take one of those leaps forward - go back to (find) the future. Trisha Ashley recommended a book about writing the breakout novel - so that's my bedtime reading this week. The only way to make any progress and move on is to accept who you are, where you are - even the things you can do nothing about. As Lao Tzu said: 'Be really whole and all things will come to you'.

Hope everyone on the 6 week challenge has had a good one - let's catch up in the comments. The draw for the 'What Kate Did Next' workbook giveaway is still open - winner to be announced on Tuesday x

TODAY'S PROMPT: If you are anything like me you spend far too much time in your head. At the moment I have three separate sets of characters yabbering away up there and it's a tad crowded. I'm finally ready to write a first draft this week and this entails going to ground for a while, giving it 100%. Whenever you are deeply engaged with a new piece of work, I've found (to my cost), it pays to take care of yourself. Why not have a think about things that work for you - more sleep, less coffee, fresh air? The single thing that helps ground you is noticing what is around you and seeing it clearly - it literally helps keep things in perspective. This week why don't you try and tune in to your observations a little more attentively - notice things, try keeping a running list each day of the things you've seen that amaze you. For example - this weekend I've seen: a golden dragonfly emerging from her exuvia; luscious fat spears of asparagus wrapped in brown paper at the farmer's market; ferrets racing; a llama batting her eyelashes as I fed her; seven toddlers in party frocks bouncing on a trampoline, giggling in the sun; heaven scented scarlet rose petals tumbling to the table. This week, to keep things in perspective why not just try noticing what's around you?

10 comments:

Kate Lord Brown said...

Hope you've all had a good one? Too much boring work related stuff this week, applying for freelance contracts rather than writing (bad) though did get 2 reviewing jobs (good). This week I've been laying foundations - research for 3 shorts and the next book completed, so now full steam ahead. So - goals for next week: 2000 words a day, get the shorts submitted, keep exercising. How about you?

Melissa B. said...

I definitely need to take a step back and smell the roses. Several times last week I felt as if my head were about to explode...literally. BTW, don't forget: Please come on over and check out my Silly Sunday Sweepstakes!

Kate Lord Brown said...

Hi Melissa - oh good, so not the only one then :) Will do ...

JES said...

Oh, I love the Hockney collages too. When still living in the NYC area, I went to a museum exhibit of his work. (Probably MOMA but for some reason I remember it at the Met.) Killed me.

And your comments about him, and about perspective and art in general, make me wonder if you've ever considered paying work writing* about art -- exhibitions, openings, and so on. Hmm?

There are two very different pleasures involved in writing (and I guess other arts have parallels): (1) the conceiving, creation, and perfection of the work, and (2) the validation of the work by others. Pretty much all of us know about (1), of course, and we know something of the "unofficial" satisfactions of (2) but long for validation on a bigger stage.

But I sometimes wonder if we don't maybe have our satisfaction volume knobs set too high. It is SUCH a slog, often, to get from the very first "I wonder if..." thought, to the fact of the phrase "The End" which concludes the final draft -- such a slog that the only just reward seems to be a quick one. But I think both (1) and (2) require roughly equal sloggery; it's just that we have less control over (2), so the frustration seems greater.

Or something like that. My, I'm full of blather this afternoon -- and the day is still young! :)

Very much satisfied with the Phase (1) stuff this week. Which is perhaps setting me up for a stall or crash this week but, for now, I'm trying to take what life offers.

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* Now there's an oxymoron for you!

mapelba said...

Breakout novel... is that the Donald Maas book? I've got that one and found some useful points. Although since I still can't get an agent, I don't know if they were really useful or I can't follow instructions. Or maybe the book doesn't work.

Sometimes I feel that I'm trying to see my work through too many perspectives and it is making my vision blurry. Or more like an Escher drawing.

MitMoi said...

Perspective ... seems like when I should be looking at the "big picture" I'm instead looking at all the dots that make up the picture. *sigh*

I was so excited last week. I felt like I'd pinned down the structure of my story - and had something specific to write towards. This weekend was basically free of obligations. Huzzah! Writing time! Only? I don't know that MUCH about southern reconstruction and THAT'S the bit I need to focus on. So - more research - and more knowledge - and less writing. How frustrating.

I'm doing 1500/day (words, unfortunately NOT calories) ... but they're not toward the WIP. *double sigh*

Pseudonymous High School Teacher said...

Wednesday is my first day of summer ; -) I am looking forward to working full steam on my writing projects and plan to counter it with long walks and lots of snorkling and body boarding. I have to do that because my body needs to be exercised or the long hours on the computer make me ansy and achy.

I also bought tow small notebooks. One for my walking fanny pack and one for my purse. I have found I get my fresest ideas when out walking.

BTW I gave a shout out for your workbook Kate, in my 200th celebratory post.

PI said...

At last I've managed to order your book. Scarlet pointed out it was because I hadn't entered the number of books I wanted - in case anyone else has the same trouble.
Re your post - even when something good happens it seems one has a day or two of euphoria and then is beset with the usual doubts and fears.
WE SHOULD BELIEVE IN OURSELVES.

Kate Lord Brown said...

Hi John - good stuff! Glad the WiP is going well.

Marta - yes it is. Book arrived this morning and I'm hoping for some inspiration ...

MitMoi - 1500 words a day of anything is not to be sneezed at (and all that writing HAS to burn a few cals right?!)

Pseudo - congratulations and thanks again for the heads up x

Pat - thank you! Support much appreciated. Think we should all print out that motto and pin on monitors x

Vermilion Cream said...

I have mailed you!! It's just too awful to display in the comment box...
I should get it into perspective...
Sx

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