Voice

Routines like this - bath, bed, story - have kept a familiar and comforting shape on what are very unfamiliar days. For me, I'm trying to focus on the good things out here. Sun, warmth, swimming every day ... Yes I'm in a desert city rather than leafy England, but the shape of our days, the demands of a young family have stayed remarkably the same. Children need clean socks wherever you are. The pilot is back on long haul - China, the US and India in the next couple of weeks. Meanwhile when I'm not dicing with Hummers on the school run, I have - finally - time to work. 'The Beauty Chorus' is being edited, and I'm lost in the world of my girls from 7am - 1pm each day, listening to Billie, Ella and the gang. I could be anywhere. That's perhaps the most wonderful thing about writing. As long as there's some stability and the basics - a desk, a chair, pen, paper - you can work anywhere in the world.
We've said before how music can be an instant 'key' into your work. Some writers like silence, maybe you do? For me as soon as I hear the opening bars of 'How High The Moon' it's like a Pavlovian reaction, (though instead of salivating for dog kibble, I am ready to start writing). What are you listening to right now as you work? For me, it's always artists with distinctive voices that work. In music, as in writing, it's that distinction - that 'voice' - that's the elusive goal. A true voice makes you feel like you are being sung to, read to, intimately - one on one.
If you enjoy audio stories, why not head over to Shortbread. Some of you have already submitted great short stories to the site. One of the early pieces I submitted, 'Company', has been chosen as one of the four summer audio stories, and recorded brilliantly by the actor Paul Jerricho. If you follow this link, click on 'Company' then listen to audio, you can hear his great performance. It's a real thrill to hear your work come to life. Hope you enjoy this and the other stories:
http://www.shortbreadstories.co.uk/player/#/member/view/fiona_smith/blog/summer_stories_audio_short_stories/
TODAY'S PROMPT: Have you tried reading your work aloud yet? If not, I really encourage you to give it a go. There is no better way to flag up flaws in your story - particularly with dialogue. If you don't feel comfortable performing your own work, you could always try downloading a free programme like DSpeech http://download.cnet.com/DSpeech/3000-2651_4-169628.html This is a text to speech programme - it's not perfect, but you can 'listen' to your words, and there's no better way than that to get a sense of if your 'voice' sounds natural.